Pokemon
They're made to catch
Born to fight
Some can be hatched
Charmander is the light
Some are fast
Some are slow
Torchic knows fire blast
Snover makes it snow
Fire types keep it warm
Fire stones for Flareon
Water types bring the storms
Water stones for Vaporeon
Umbreon is lika a shadow
Grovyle knows the move endeavor
Chikorita likes the meadow
Psychic types are clever
If I could just catch
A Butterfree
Or hatch
A baby Eevee
Me and my Magnemite
Would be so excited
Just thought some of you might like this.
Pokemon Poem
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Re: Pokemon Poem
I'd say reread the last two lines to yourself and see if you can't figure out a word other than "excited" for the ending. Otherwise, it was a very nicely written poem. I was cute, it was short, but it wasn't at all boring and it had a flow to it as you read it. Good job! I just think your last word "excited" doesn't quite do it justice.
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Re: Pokemon Poem
Love the poem but...like pikapower06 I don't thing excited it the right word at the end.
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Re: Pokemon Poem
I like the poem. It's really nice.
Re: Pokemon Poem
I like this!