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pikachugirltt
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Ash stood in his room holding his math book in his hand. The air flew through the window and ahs felt the breeze on the back of his neck. Ash turned around and he put the book on his bed. Ash's mom yelled to him "Ash come downstairs to eat breakfast." Ash opened his door and ran downstairs. The kitchen smelled like Shin-Yo. Shin-Yo is a kind of Japanese food. "Ash come sit down and eat because you have school in 15 minutes." Plates were all over the counter with Shin-Yo on the plates. Ash's mom turned around and sat down. "Ash did you finish your homework last night?" Ash didn't say anything. The clock said 8:15 and Ash was supposed to be at school at 8:20. Ash shoved that last bit of Shin-Yo in his mouth and ran out the door.

The nice fresh air felt really good on Ash's face. People wre walking on the sidewalk and cars were speeding down the road. A boy was walking on the sidewalk kicking a rock. Ash ran to the boy and said "Hey brock, what's up.?" Brock said " Well my Zubat is sick and I can't find any cure for it." Ash took his backpack off and unzipped it. He slid his hand in his backpack and grabed a bottle. Brock was wiping his pants off because grass stains were on it. Ash handed the bottle to Brock and Brock put the bottle in his backpack. " "Come on Ash we need to get to school."

Ash started running to the school. The school was huge and tons of people were running inside. Ash and Brock rand up the steps and into the school.

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sorry for the spelling errors. I fixed them.
Last edited by pikachugirltt on Sun 01 Oct, 2006 9:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Fazzy »

You have a lot of spelling errors...
Well, Timmy, aren't you being a cotton-headed ninny muggins.

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Post by Kas_Ranger »

I like ur story

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Post by Pikachu3828 »

Your writing is for your own work, not fan work. Moving.

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Post by Fazzy »

Thank you for fixing them..
Your writing's pretty good...
Well, Timmy, aren't you being a cotton-headed ninny muggins.

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Post by Pikaman123 »

Nice job! That story was cool!

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