Bob and the fish alien!

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Bob and the fish alien!

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I had to write a story as homework and i like the story and am posting it here for everyone who wants to read it! here it is:

Bob and the fish Alien!

Once upon a time there was a cute little bunny called Pinky!
Pinky was hopping along the chocolate stream in happyland when Bob the secret agent.... I mean normal guy showed up!
"Where am I? Am I in the wrong scene?" Bob asked.
"CUT, CUT, CUT!!!!!" The Director screamed at the top of his voice!
"This is the wrong scene it's suppose to be the target practice scene!"
Then some other guy walked onto the set!
"You can't cut when we are live!" The guy said to the director.
"We're live?" The director asked.
"Ahahahahahahaha!" The audience laughing sound effects laughed!
"Hey no sound effects at this time it is not funny!" The Director yelled!
"Ahahahahahahaha!" The sound effects laughed again!
"Hey you people over there doing nothing come over here and keep the audience busy while we get ready to start again!" The Director screamed!
"OK!!!!!!!!!!!" The people screamed back at the Director!
"We'll see you after the break!" One of the people said!
"This is a book there is no break!" Another one of them said.
"Oh well....... then what?" He replied.
"Good job now get out the scene we are ready!" The Director said!
"And........ Action!" The Director went!
Bob was in a shooting range practicing his shooting skillls!
"Take this you stupid target!" Bob called out shooting each target!
Then he jumped to do a jump shot but as he was going to shoot someone called Billy walked in and shouted, "Hey Bob want to eat?"
"Hey Billy of course I want to eat I've been starved here!" Bob replied.
"Well today is your lucky day it's fish fingers from this fish I caught!" Billy said!
"Oh good fish fingers my favourite food!" Bob replied.
"No please don't eat me I don't like people who try to eat me!" The fish suddenly shouted out!
"Shut up fish!!!!" Bob and Billy both called out!
"Anyway you can't have me for fish fingers since I have no fingers only flippers!" The fish replied.
"Then it is settled fish flippers for lunch!" Billy said!
"Oh great!" The fish said!
Then a great big fish alien came in!
"What are you?" Bob asked the alien!
Suddenly the alien shot at Bob with a lazer but Bob jumped away!
"This is bad!" Billy said to Bob!
"Very bad!" Bob said back!
Then the alien shot at Billy but Billy jumped away!
"Get the gun!" Billy shouted to Bob!
"I'm on it!" Bob shouted back as he grabbed the gun!
But just as Bob grabbed the gun a big light exploded and he and Billy were blinded!
The next thing they knew was they were fishes swimming around!
"This doesn't look like the ocean more like a alien planet!" Bob said to Billy!
"We have to escape somehow!" Billy said.
"Question is how...." Bob said.
"First we swim away from here and out that hole then try escape to are own planet!" Billy said pointing to a hole in their prison!
"Good idea why didn't I see that?" Bob said.
So Bob and Billy escaped their prison to an open planet but had no idea on how to get off the planet!
They found a big water pillar but didn't know what it was for!
"I wonder what that is and what it does?" Billy asked Bob!
"Me to lets check it out!" Bob said swimming into the pillar!
"No wait it might be dangerous... Bob?.. NO!!!!! Bob don't do it!" Billy said to Bob!
"Whatever this could be are only chance of getting back to earth!" Bob said to Billy.
"Ok if you put it that way." Billy replied following Bob!
As they went in they were shot upwards into the sky into some sort of gateway to all worlds!
"Wow... where are we?" Billy asked Bob!
"Some kind of gateway... maybe to every planet... including ours!" Bob replied.
"Then how do we know which is the one we want?" Billy asked Bob.
"Simple.... read the signs and one should say earth!" Bob ansered.
"Oh... yeah I knew that I was testing you to see if you knew..." Billy said.
"And?" Bob asked.
"And.... you passed well done!" Billy answered!
"So lets find it!" Billy called out!
"Found it!!!" Bob called out a second after!
"But I just... wait how... no you were looking before weren't you?" Billy spluttered out!
"Stop with all the nonsense and come over here so we can get back!" Bob shouted at Billy!
"Ok!" Billy replied.
So they travelled back to earth and lived a happy life... untill McDonalds decided to do fish flippers.... that was when Bob and Billy were eaten by the people who love eating at McDonalds!


what do you think?
please comment but try not to insult t in any way cause i spent a bit of time doing this story

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it's got a nice sense of humor. 8/10.
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Thank you for the comment :-D

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Post by Fazzy »

7/10.
No comment.
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Post by Raimunchu »

Errrrrrrrrrr.... Good! :roll:
School's started,but who really cares anyway?
life,is but nothing,
death,however,
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