Black Sheep

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Black Sheep

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Okay, this is my newest poem/lyrics. Depends.

[align=center]A black sheep
The one that dosen't belong
With the rest of the flock,
And is thus left behind,
Tied to the Earth in an endless purgatory,
Left to suffer on my own,
Without a guardian angel watching over me.

All because my flock left me on my own,
To wither and to fall
For all eternity.

I am a black sheep,
One that has had everything taken away,
With nothing left to leave inside of me.

I realize that I've done this to myself;
Welcomed this solitude
Now forever lost to all, unreachable.
I've locked up all my true emotions, locked them up inside myself;
A decision that has guided me,
Guided me to my cursed fate.

All because my flock left me on my own,
To wither and to fall
For all eternity.

I am a black sheep,
One that has had everything taken away,
With nothing left to leave inside of me.
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I like fruit-flavored tea. : )

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Post by Fazzy »

9/10.
No comment except pretty downcast.
Well, Timmy, aren't you being a cotton-headed ninny muggins.

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Post by miradapurple »

......

I think you mean depressing/ cheerless/ dispiriting /melancholic/ joyless/ gloomy/ tenebrific/ dreary/ somber/ bleak/ austere/ dour/ saturnine/ morose?

Any of those?
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Post by Fazzy »

Yup. Pretty much.
Well, Timmy, aren't you being a cotton-headed ninny muggins.

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Post by miradapurple »

Okay, then. Lolz.

Well, thanks. It's pretty much what I aimed for.
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