Eliza's Diary

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Eliza's Diary

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I ran to my dark-lit bedroom and collapse onto my bed, my black skirt flowing behind. the light rippling through as the wind gently made it wave. I cry, my head playing from the headache from the raging argument I recently broke from with my mother.
"ELIZA! YOUR BOYFRIEND'S A MUPPET!!!"
I hear my own replies tore through my head also. I dip the feather quill back inot the ink pot, for more black ink. I continue to write on.
How would she know, she hasn't even met the guy I love! I'm so sick and tired of her being nasty to my friends behind their backs to me!!!

Tears begin to form in my eyes, with a blink, they fall onto the paper pages of my diary, almost making the ink run.

I humanly can't understand why she'd say those things about my friends, even tho She hasn't even met them. She doesn't even want to meet them. I'm lucky to even HAVE friends, but why is my mother so nasty to them for?

I look up, and look through the window that look out to a vast field. I get up off the mattress. Pulling up my web-net gloves, to walk closer to the window, I look up towards the full roundness of the moon - again with a sigh. I turn away from the window and wonder aimlessly around my room.

*2*b*c*
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Post by seavicky95 »

seems like a good story. 9/10.
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Post by DarkAlex »

This is weird. 8/10.
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9/10 nice
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Post by Animalxerman »

:) i like it...9/10
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