City of Broken Glass

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City of Broken Glass

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City of Broken Glass

I'll walk through your city of broken glass
Death in the roadsigns and blood-watered grass
People hide in their homes, to scared to come out
Lives lived in misery, darkness and doubt

What was the sun has become a hole in the sky
Draining our cheer and making us cry
Every dream is forgotten, every hope is to die
No one loves anymore without the will to try.


Wrote this in Geometry.... Supposed to be a song if I make it longer.

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Re: City of Broken Glass

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Very good, I can really imagine the scene...
Is it about a war or something?
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Thanks. xD I'm considering whether I should draw a picture for it.

I'm not entirely sure what it is. At first, I meant it to be an illustration of how disturbing humanity has become, but things ended up a bit too literal.
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You're a pretty good poet Purple xP
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I try.
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This is just... Beautiful (I'm a guy and would rather die than say that word, but it's too good to describe in other words) , keep up the good work!!


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