Team Galactic's Writing Tips: Editing and Revising

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Team Galactic's Writing Tips: Editing and Revising

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Hi I'm Cyrus from Team Galactic! Today I'm going to show you how to edit and revise!
Revise:
Insert/Delete Words!
Ex:
Regular:I had a fun time.
Revised:I had a really fun time at the park!
See? He revised and gave the location and said he really had a fun time!
Ex:
Regular: I had a really fun time at the park! It was sunny like Sunnyshore City!
Revised: I had a Really fun time at the park!
Editing:
Ex:
Regular: i had a really fun tim at da park?
Edited:
I had a really good time at the park!
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