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My reading teacher, Ms. Nicks, took us to the library. I have read a wide variety of these books, so i browsed awhile. I came across a book that was not labeled. I took it to a table to begin reading the mysterious book. I cracked it open and a pillar of dazzling white light shot out. My consciousness was gone for a few hours.
I awoke in a strange room in a very uncomfortable bed. In the room, was a young woman with shiny blonde hair tending a fire. I turned to see my friends lying in adjacent beds. I rubbed my eyes, thinking I was seeing things, to find out I was not.
to be honest... *** 3 Stars
A. How couldn't they see him/her pass out?
B.It just ends with "I saw my friends in bed. I thought I was seeing things. I wasn't
