Icy Storms(PG rating)

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Icy Storms(PG rating)

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Here is a fanfic I made all about a Glalie!I will also post a directory when I get up to chapters 1 and 2.
Well I hope you enjoy the Prologue!
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Disclaimer:I do not pokémon.Pokémon is owned by Nintendo.
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Prologue-Frozen Ice

The scene starts with a Wobbuffet.It put it's left arm on a wall.It did the
same with it's right arm and made an X and a door appeared and opened.
The Wobbuffet entered.It's name was Jacob Harley.When he entered the
room it would be the last step he ever made.

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Jacob Harley was dead.His body was found by a group of officials
from the Pokémon Researchers Club.It was quiet when his body was
found.The person that discovered the body was a Snorunt called
Samuel Storn.Jacob was his teacher back when Samuel was a
kid.Seeing him dead he felt unhappy and wanted to get revenge.
“Samuel it wasn't your fault,â€Â￾said a small snake like pokémon.This
was an Ekans called James Bones who was Samuel's best friend.
“Yeah I guess so,â€Â￾Samuel said.

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We now see the inside of a mansion and three figures talking.
"Is he dead?"asked a medium sized pokémon with a thunderbolt on it's
tail.This was a Raichu.
"Yes,he is sir,"said two black pokémon with razor sharp claws.These
were Sneasel.
"Good,very good in deed."
"Thankyou sir."
Now go I need to finish my omelet,â€Â￾said the Raichu.
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Tell me if I need to put the rating higher or lower.
It started of pretty dark but ended in what I thought was a funny way.if your wondering why I chose sneasel as the assasins well it was 'caus there blackness makes them look like ninjas.
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interesting, very interesting
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Post by -Dark Lugia- »

Next time on Icy Storms:
We find out the Ninja Sneasel's names!

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Post by katara9 »

Thats is really good

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This fic may be being deleted and replaced by a new fic called Time Traveler so once I join the poll club thingy I'll make a poll here asking if you wanna join.

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