Would You Bleed?

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Would You Bleed?

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Would you bleed
for a love?

Would you bleed
for a cause?

Would you bleed
to know the truth?

Would you bleed
for a wish?

I would.
So little to give
But so much to obtain.

If all you had to do was
Bleed.

Bleed to find the cures.

Bleed to see through the lies.

Bleed to know true love.

Bleed to feel.

Would you bleed?


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Re: Would You Bleed?

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o-o Woah, you're a great poet. I'd say this one is my favorite out of the 4. I can relate to it the most.

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Re: Would You Bleed?

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Sasu.....This is beautiful, and definitely does it's purpose for the whole reason it had for even bothering with the reader.

As stated before me, you are a wonderful poet.
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Re: Would You Bleed?

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Lawl. x3 Thanks.
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