Poetry

Aenwyrm · Post by **Aenwyrm** » Fri 26 May, 2006 7:31 am

Ok so this is my first post in this section..and I wrote this poem when I was going through some really rough relationship problems..so here it is.

The pain inside
hurts immensely

H ecared about her
with all that he had

He waited all day
nothing happened

His heart was broken
he had always been there for her

always asking if she was alright
caring for her like she was his soul

Now his time of need was come and gone
she never appeared
he waited patiently thinking of all the reasons

It never came.
covinced that he had been abandoned.

Drowning now in his sorrow
he wastes away from
his need to help someone

..so there it is. I know the spelling and grammar might be a little off, but thats what makes it unique, right?

jmai94 · Post by **jmai94** » Sat 27 May, 2006 2:43 pm

I like it, I think it's very creative, though I think it's a bit sad too...

pikapower06 · Post by **pikapower06** » Fri 02 Jun, 2006 1:21 am

Interesting....good....and tis sad....

dark_knight_13 · Post by **dark_knight_13** » Sun 02 Jul, 2006 4:20 am

im not sure if its safe to put my writings here because theres always people thats gonna steal!!!

dark_knight_13 · Post by **dark_knight_13** » Sun 02 Jul, 2006 4:20 am

Limerick

There once was a girl named Annabel.
Who had tripped and fell in a well.
On her funeral day
The church bell had to play
Here we are for your final farewell.

dark_knight_13 · Post by **dark_knight_13** » Sun 02 Jul, 2006 4:21 am

Limerick

There once was a boy from Peru
Bad things is what he liked to do.
He rang a doorbell,
Then he ran like hell
Owner shot him with a .22.

dark_knight_13 · Post by **dark_knight_13** » Sun 02 Jul, 2006 4:26 am

im not sure if they are good!!!

miradapurple · Post by **miradapurple** » Fri 14 Jul, 2006 8:15 pm

I'll tell you once you stop quadruple posting.....

Post by **Pikachu3828** » Fri 14 Jul, 2006 9:09 pm

dark_knight_13 create your own topic to post your limmericks rather than hijacking miradapurple's.

dark_knight_13 · Post by **dark_knight_13** » Fri 14 Jul, 2006 9:35 pm

Pikachu3828 wrote:dark_knight_13 create your own topic to post your limmericks rather than hijacking miradapurple's.

ooo im sorry!

miradapurple · Post by **miradapurple** » Sat 15 Jul, 2006 4:46 am

Pikachu3828 wrote:dark_knight_13 create your own topic to post your limmericks rather than hijacking miradapurple's.

Actully, this topic isn't mine.

Myuuzard · Post by **Myuuzard** » Thu 24 Aug, 2006 12:12 pm

He proably ment Aenwyrm