Flawed Perfection

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miradapurple
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Flawed Perfection

Post by miradapurple »

Many nights
I’ve spent by my
Windowsill.
Always waiting
For the clouds to move
Aside,
So I might glimpse the moon’s
Alabaster surface,
Perfect in its flaws.

Waiting is torture
Eternity slipping by.
A glimmer passes through
The indistinct silver clouds,
Renewing hope.

Always waiting
For the clouds to move
Aside,
So I might glimpse the moon’s
Alabaster surface,
Perfect in its flaws.



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Post by Fazzy »

Pretty Nice. 8.6/10
Well, Timmy, aren't you being a cotton-headed ninny muggins.
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Post by Maple »

O_O It is...wait for it.............wait for it........................................waaaait....................................................................................PERFECTO!
ooohhhh...aaahhhhhh...
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