Christmas poem

Robert · Post by **Robert** » Wed 29 Nov, 2006 8:09 pm

I had to do a Christmas poem for homework and anyone who would like to can read it and comment.

Christmas poem
One christmas when snowballs fly,
snow-snow-snowflakes from the sky.

Christmas joy, Christmas joy.
Open a present and get a toy.

One of the teachers got hit on the head,
mouth went wonkey, they could only eat bread.

Christmas joy, Christmas joy.
Santa will come if you're a good boy.

When the snow melted it was boring,
instead of snow it was pouring.

Christmas joy, fading away.
When someone shouted out, "Hey!"

Everyone look up way up high,
they saw Santa in the sky.

seavicky95 · Post by **seavicky95** » Thu 30 Nov, 2006 12:37 am

that is a very good poem! 9.5/10.

Fazzy · Post by **Fazzy** » Thu 30 Nov, 2006 2:13 am

I'm not sure about the teacher getting hit on the head..... 7/10.

Robert · Post by **Robert** » Thu 30 Nov, 2006 6:19 pm

thank you both.

and fazzy I couldn't think of anything else to put there instead.

flare · Post by **flare** » Tue 05 Dec, 2006 9:43 pm

d-dang @_@ 9.9/10!

Robert · Post by **Robert** » Tue 05 Dec, 2006 10:13 pm

ok so that makes a 9.5 and 7 and 9.9 all out of 10.
I'm just going to work out the mean.
9.5+7+9.9= 26.4
26.4 / 3 = 8.5 (only around that)

/ = divide.
so If my calculations are right (I did just do them quick in my head) the mean is 8.5.
that's quite good.
more than i thought it would be

pikapower06 · Post by **pikapower06** » Tue 05 Dec, 2006 11:55 pm

7.9/10. Its nice ^^

Shrine Sprite · Post by **Shrine Sprite** » Fri 29 Dec, 2006 12:05 am

Like Fazzy said already, I'm not so sure about the third verse. :lol:
It's very good though. o: